The Successful Screenwriter with Geoffrey D Calhoun: Screenwriting Podcast

Geoffrey D. Calhoun and Kristy Leigh Lussier explore what happened when Geoffrey entered Screenwriting Reddit to offer writers free advice without promoting himself or selling anything. His posts quickly reached thousands of writers—but a message encouraging compassion also attracted hostility from the community’s self-appointed gatekeepers.They break down why some online writing communities become toxic, how anonymous critics continually move the goalposts, and why writers need to protect their confidence. Geoffrey and Kristy also discuss the surprising release of Coyote vs. Acme, Jason Statham’s unusual fight-contract rules, when a screenplay prologue works, and why a 30-minute short film may need to become a feature. What You’ll Learn in This Episode: What happened when Geoffrey infiltrated Screenwriting Reddit Why compassion matters in online screenwriting communities How writers can protect themselves from toxic feedback Why studios shelve completed movies for financial reasons How to avoid using a prologue as an exposition dump Why an overly long short film may work better as a feature Key Moments: 02:27 – How Coyote vs. Acme escaped the studio shelf 08:41 – The unusual rules behind Jason Statham’s fight scenes 09:45 – Geoffrey infiltrates Screenwriting Reddit 12:26 – When the Screenwriting Reddit trolls arrived 16:15 – Knowing your value when critics attack 24:10 – Avoiding the exposition and monologue trap 24:48 – Why a 30-minute short film may need to become a feature Resources Mentioned in the Episode: Screenwriting Reddit Coyote vs. Acme Batgirl Mutiny Terminator 2: Judgment Day Halloween The Lord of the Rings Rabbit Trap Screenplay prologues and cold opens Short-film structure Online screenwriting communities Connect with Guest Instagram: @kantoka127 Watch her vertical drama: The Witch Wolf's Mate Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun Watch: Elsy Website: thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com Instagram: @screenwriterpod YouTube: @thesuccessfulscreenwriter #screenwriting #filmmaking #writingtips #screenwriterlife #storytelling #filmindustry #indiefilm #writerslife Please share this podcast with your community!

Geoffrey D. Calhoun and Kristy Leigh Lussier break down one of the easiest ways to spot weak screenwriting: dialogue nobody would actually say. They share practical ways to write more authentic conversations before answering listener questions about first drafts, fixing scenes, formatting flashbacks, and whether a writer should ever give up on the dream. What You’ll Learn in This Episode: Why generic dialogue can immediately weaken a screenplay How listening to real conversations can improve your character dialogue Why every scene needs its own purpose, objective, and forward momentum How to keep moving when a scene is slowing down your first draft How to approach flashbacks and scene numbering in a screenplay Why screenwriting formatting has become less rigid over the years Why your filmmaking career may not look the way you originally imagined How writers and directors can start creating with the resources they have right now. Key Moments: 01:24 – Breaking down character-driven storytelling in recent movies 06:03 – The generic dialogue screenwriters need to stop using 10:30 – Kristy's techniques for developing authentic character voices 12:36 – What every scene needs to accomplish 15:26 – Why Geoffrey stopped using Final Draft 16:53 – When should you give up on your dream of writing and directing? 19:57 – Redefining what it means to be a writer and director today About the Co-host: Kristy Leigh Lussier is a screenwriter, filmmaker, and creative collaborator who works across multiple genres including horror and drama. She has experience in independent film production, writing, and on-set collaboration, and regularly shares insights into the filmmaking process with the screenwriting community. About the Host: With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level. Resources Mentioned in the Episode: Indie Gathering International Film Festival Screenplay dialogue and character development Final Draft screenwriting software Independent filmmaking Vertical filmmaking and mobile-first storytelling Connect with Kristy Leigh Lussier Instagram: @kantoka Watch Kristy’s vertical drama: The Witch Wolf's Mate. Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun Watch Geoffrey's Vertical Thriller: Elsy Website: thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com Instagram: @screenwriterpod YouTube: @thesuccessfulscreenwriter #ScreenwritingPodcast #ScreenwritingTips #Screenwriting #WritingDialogue #Screenplay #Filmmaking #IndieFilmmaker #Scriptwriting #TheSuccessfulScreenwriter #WritingCommunity Connect with Guest Instagram: @kantoka127 Watch her vertical drama: The Witch Wolf's Mate Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun Watch: Elsy Website: thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com Instagram: @screenwriterpod YouTube: @thesuccessfulscreenwriter #screenwriting #filmmaking #writingtips #screenwriterlife #storytelling #filmindustry #indiefilm #writerslife Please share this podcast with your community!

Discover how an ordinary break room transformed into a post-apocalyptic set for Geoffrey’s new vertical thriller, Elsy. In this episode, Geoffrey and Kristy sit down with filmmaker and Vault Studio founder George Ansara to explore his journey from commercial videography to launching one of Michigan’s top independent film studios. Go behind the scenes of Elsy’s intense five-day shoot, and learn the keys to indie film success: preparation, collaboration, and community. George reveals how Vault Studio empowers creators with affordable, professional spaces, while Geoffrey and Kristy share insights on producing indie films and the power of filmmakers supporting each other. What You'll Learn in This Episode: How George Ansara built Vault Studio into a filmmaker-first production facility Behind-the-scenes stories from filming Elsy How Geoffrey designed an entire film set using 3D modeling and AI visualization Why adaptable production spaces save time, money, and stress on independent productions The producer's perspective on keeping a five-day shoot running smoothly Why collaboration not competition is the key to growing the independent film community George's work with the Detroit 48 Hour Film Project and supporting local filmmakers Help us spread the word and support indie filmmaking! Our new vertical thriller Elsy premieres soon, and the first trailer is live now on Instagram. Watch the Elsy trailer now on Instagram Here Watch the trailer, share it to your stories, comment with your theories, and tag a friend who loves mystery, suspense, and post-apocalyptic storytelling. Every share helps us reach new viewers and brings more attention to independent filmmaking. About the Host With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter Podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level. Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun Website: https://thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com Instagram:@screenwriterpod YouTube: @thesuccessfulscreenwrite Connect with Kristy Lee Lussier Instagram: @kantoka127 Connect with George Ansara Vault Studio: Vault Studio Podcast #Screenwriting #Filmmaking #IndieFilm #IndependentFilm #FilmProduction #MichiganFilm #VaultStudio #VerticalSeries #Elsy #DetroitFilm #48HourFilmProject #Screenwriter #Storytelling #TheSuccessfulScreenwriter Connect with Guest Instagram: @kantoka127 Watch her vertical drama: The Witch Wolf's Mate Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun Watch: Elsy Website: thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com Instagram: @screenwriterpod YouTube: @thesuccessfulscreenwriter #screenwriting #filmmaking #writingtips #screenwriterlife #storytelling #filmindustry #indiefilm #writerslife Please share this podcast with your community!

In this episode of The Successful Screenwriter, Geoffrey D. Calhoun and Kristy Leigh Lussier break down why some movies fail despite strong marketing, using Supergirl as a case study to explore how theme, character, and a worthy antagonist determine whether a story truly resonates with audiences. They also discuss the current state of Hollywood, the rise of independent filmmaking, and why audiences may be returning to theaters for the right films. Plus: Why a story without a clear theme feels hollow What makes an antagonist compelling The truth behind "Hollywood is back" Terrible screenwriting advice: "Just add a montage" Geoffrey shares one of the worst screenplay query emails he's ever received—and the surprising response after he tried to mentor the writer AI-generated outreach emails and why human editing still matters Fourth of July movie recommendations and a few classic film memories Whether you're an aspiring screenwriter, filmmaker, or movie lover, this episode dives into the storytelling principles that separate memorable films from forgettable ones.If you're serious about writing better screenplays, subscribe for weekly conversations on screenwriting, directing, filmmaking, and breaking down the myths of the entertainment industry.📚 Geoffrey's Book: The Guide for Every Screenwriter🎬 #Screenwriting #Filmmaking #Supergirl #WritingAdvice #Screenwriter #Storytelling #Movies #FilmAnalysis #Hollywood #TheSuccessfulScreenwriter Connect with Guest Instagram: @kantoka127 Watch her vertical drama: The Witch Wolf's Mate Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun Watch: Elsy Website: thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com Instagram: @screenwriterpod YouTube: @thesuccessfulscreenwriter #screenwriting #filmmaking #writingtips #screenwriterlife #storytelling #filmindustry #indiefilm #writerslife Please share this podcast with your community!

What if the voice keeping you alive couldn't be trusted? In this special episode of The Successful Screenwriter, Geoffrey D. Calhoun sits down with Assistant Director Kristy Leigh Lussier and interviewer Jess Paul to pull back the curtain on Elsy, a cinematic post-apocalyptic vertical series premiering this July. For over a decade, Elsy existed in different forms a web series, a feature film, a television project before finally finding its perfect home in the exploding world of vertical storytelling. Now, Geoffrey makes his directorial debut with a psychological thriller that blends mystery, survival, loneliness, and hope into a mobile-first cinematic experience unlike anything currently available in the vertical space. In this episode, you'll discover: How vertical storytelling is transforming the entertainment industry The challenge of creating a cinematic experience in a vertical format The process of casting Karly Coffee, Rochelle Nicole, and Eric Roman Behind-the-scenes stories from shooting 21 episodes in just 5 days Why loneliness is the emotional core of Elsy The future of vertical series and why Geoffrey believes this is where storytelling is headed Elsy follows a young woman trapped inside a bunker after a mysterious catastrophe leaves the world buried beneath ash. Alone, isolated, and running out of supplies, she discovers a voice on a CB radio. But as hope grows, so do the questions. Can she trust the person on the other end? And what happens when survival depends on believing a lie? If you're a filmmaker, screenwriter, content creator, or simply fascinated by where entertainment is headed next, this episode offers an inside look at the future of storytelling. Topics Covered Vertical Series Production Post-Apocalyptic Storytelling Psychological Thrillers Writing for Mobile Audiences Film Production on a Budget The Future of Streaming Content Behind the Scenes of Elsy About ELSY Elsy is a cinematic vertical thriller following a young woman surviving alone in a bunker after the collapse of civilization. As she forms a connection with a mysterious voice over a CB radio, she begins questioning everything she thought she knew about her world. Written and Directed by Geoffrey D. Calhoun. Coming July 2026. 🚨 Watch the ELSY Trailer: Instagram: @screenwriterpod Watch the trailer, follow the journey, and share your theories before the series premieres. #Elsy #VerticalSeries #PostApocalyptic #PsychologicalThriller #IndieFilm #Screenwriting #Filmmaking #VerticalDrama #DirectorDebut #TheSuccessfulScreenwriter #SurvivalThriller #MysterySeries #MobileStorytelling #FilmmakerPodcast Connect with Guest Instagram: @kantoka127 Watch her vertical drama: The Witch Wolf's Mate Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun Watch: Elsy Website: thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com Instagram: @screenwriterpod YouTube: @thesuccessfulscreenwriter #screenwriting #filmmaking #writingtips #screenwriterlife #storytelling #filmindustry #indiefilm #writerslife Please share this podcast with your community!

Hollywood is in the middle of a major shift, and many writers may not realize how quickly the rules are changing. In this episode, Geoffrey and Kristy explore the success of creator-driven projects like Backrooms, the growing influence of online audiences. They discuss what today's moviegoers are actually paying to see, how YouTube creators and independent filmmakers are bringing audiences back to theaters, and what these changes mean for screenwriters trying to build careers in an evolving industry. What You'll Learn in This Episode Why creator-driven films are disrupting Hollywood What the success of Backrooms reveals about modern audiences Strategies for writing authentic dialogue How to approach talent attachment and financing Help us spread the word and support indie filmmaking ! Our new vertical thriller Elsy premieres this July, and the first trailer is live now on Instagram. Watch the Elsy trailer now on Instagram Here Watch the trailer, share it to your stories, comment your theories and tag a friend who loves mystery, suspense, and post-apocalyptic storytelling. Every share helps us reach new viewers and brings more attention to independent filmmaking. About the Host With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level. Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun Website: thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com Instagram: @screenwriterpod YouTube: @thesuccessfulscreenwriter Connect with Kristy Instagram: @kantoka127 Watch The Witch Wolf's Mate : C #Screenwriting #Filmmaking #Hollywood #Backrooms #IndieFilm #Screenwriter #WritingCommunity #FilmIndustry #Storytelling #TheSuccessfulScreenwriter Connect with Guest Instagram: @kantoka127 Watch her vertical drama: The Witch Wolf's Mate Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun Watch: Elsy Website: thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com Instagram: @screenwriterpod YouTube: @thesuccessfulscreenwriter #screenwriting #filmmaking #writingtips #screenwriterlife #storytelling #filmindustry #indiefilm #writerslife Please share this podcast with your community!

In this episode, Geoffrey and Kristy lighten things up after a heavy week and dive into what’s happening in movies right now. From walking out of Super Mario Bros 2 to breaking down why fan service is starting to replace real storytelling, this conversation gets honest about where the industry is heading. They also explore why adaptations like Project Hail Mary are resonating with audiences, how the Hero’s Journey is still alive and well, and answer real screenwriting questions from listeners. If you’ve been frustrated with modern films or wondering how to sharpen your own writing, this episode gives you clarity and direction. What You’ll Learn in This Episode Why fan service is replacing story in major IP films The problem with introducing characters too late in a script Why faithful adaptations like Project Hail Mary work The truth about the Hero’s Journey and why it never dies How to write stronger characters in short films Best practices for writing love scenes in today’s industry How to approach a 48-hour film festival script Why you don’t need Hollywood to succeed as a screenwriter Key Moments 00:20 – Opening and shift to a lighter episode 00:55 – Geoffrey walks out of Mario Bros 2 and why 02:14 – The rise of fan service over storytelling 06:52 – Why Project Hail Mary connects with audiences 14:34 – “The Hero’s Journey is dead?” debate About the Cohost Kristy Leigh Lussier is a filmmaker and storyteller working across multiple formats, including the fast-growing vertical content space. She brings both creative and production insight into modern storytelling trends and industry shifts. About the Host With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level. Resources Mentioned in the Episode Project Hail Mary Interstellar The Martian Ready or Not 2 They Will Kill You Connect with Guest Instagram: @kantoka127 Watch her vertical drama: The Witch Wolfs Mate Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun Website: thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com Instagram: @screenwriterpod YouTube: @thesuccessfulscreenwriter #screenwriting #filmmaking #writingtips #screenwriterlife #storytelling #filmindustry #indiefilm #writerslife Connect with Guest Instagram: @kantoka127 Watch her vertical drama: The Witch Wolf's Mate Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun Watch: Elsy Website: thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com Instagram: @screenwriterpod YouTube: @thesuccessfulscreenwriter #screenwriting #filmmaking #writingtips #screenwriterlife #storytelling #filmindustry #indiefilm #writerslife Please share this podcast with your community!

Listener discretion is advised. Episode contains discussion of mental health and suicidal ideation. If you or someone you know is struggling, you are not alone. Call or text 988 to reach the Suicide & Crisis Lifeline for free, confidential support. In this deeply personal and powerful episode, Geoffrey shares his recent experience being hospitalized for mental health and suicidal ideation. What starts as a shocking revelation turns into an honest, raw conversation about depression, trauma, and the silent struggles many creatives face. Together with co-host Kristy Leigh, this episode explores what it feels like to hit a breaking point, what happens inside a psychiatric hospital, and why seeking help is not weakness but survival. If you’ve ever felt alone, overwhelmed, or like you’re not enough, this conversation is for you. This isn’t just about screenwriting. It’s about staying here. If this episode reaches one person who needs it, it’s done its job. What You’ll Learn in This Episode The difference between sadness and high-functioning depression What really happens during a psychiatric hospital stay Why many creatives feel isolated despite outward success How “masking” hides internal struggles The importance of support systems during mental health crises Why seeking help is a strength, not a weakness How writing can serve as a lifeline during dark moments Key Moments 00:23 – Episode introduction and unexpected reveal 00:49 – Geoffrey shares he was planning suicide 03:19 – Inside the psychiatric hospital experience 05:51 – Why people don’t reach out when they’re struggling 08:33 – The reality of masking and hidden depression 11:25 – Why writing became a saving grace 11:43 – The importance of the 988 crisis line About the Cohost Kristy Leigh Lussier is a filmmaker, writer, and creative collaborator who brings honesty and empathy to conversations about storytelling and life in the industry. As Geoffrey’s co-host, she helps guide meaningful discussions that go beyond craft and into the human experience behind it. About the Host With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level. Resources Mentioned in the Episode Suicide & Crisis Lifeline (U.S.): Call or text 988 Local mental health professionals and support groups Connect with Guest Instagram: @kantoka127 Watch Kristy’s vertical drama: The-Witch-Wolfs-Mate Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun Website: thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com Instagram: @screenwriterpod YouTube: @thesuccessfulscreenwriter You’re not alone in this journey. #MentalHealthAwareness #ScreenwritingLife #CreativeStruggles #DepressionAwareness #FilmmakerLife #WritersJourney #YouAreNotAlone #TheSuccessfulScreenwriter Connect with Guest Instagram: @kantoka127 Watch her vertical drama: The Witch Wolf's Mate Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun Watch: Elsy Website: thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com Instagram: @screenwriterpod YouTube: @thesuccessfulscreenwriter #screenwriting #filmmaking #writingtips #screenwriterlife #storytelling #filmindustry #indiefilm #writerslife Please share this podcast with your community!

Geoffrey D. Calhoun and Kristy Leigh return from a short hiatus with exciting news: they’re officially launching their new vertical series. In this episode, they discuss what it’s like to move from talking about filmmaking to actually producing a project together, including casting, crew building, and preparing for production. They also dive into a major industry shakeup involving the rumored Paramount and Warner Bros. consolidation, what it could mean for creators, and why the rise of vertical storytelling platforms may open new doors for independent filmmakers and screenwriters. Plus, Geoffrey and Kristy answer listener questions about writer’s block, creative doubt, genre preferences, writing habits, and surprising books that deserve film adaptations. If you're a screenwriter navigating the changing entertainment landscape, this conversation is packed with insight and perspective. What You’ll Learn in This Episode Why vertical series may become a major opportunity for indie filmmakers The difference between talking about filmmaking and actually producing a project How to break through writer’s block and restart creative momentum Why self-doubt is normal for writers at every level of their career How major media mergers could reshape the future of film and television The value of writing habits and routines for maintaining productivity Key Moments 00:20 – Geoffrey and Kristy return from hiatus and tease their new vertical series 02:05 – The origin of Elsy and why Geoffrey revived the script now 03:46 – The rumored vertical storytelling platforms for indie filmmakers 12:55 – Breaking through writer’s block and finding creative flow 19:20 – Should writers focus on one project or juggle multiple scripts? 22:33 – Dealing with doubt as a screenwriter 26:29 – Writing nonfiction stories and handling sensitive personal material About the Cohost Kristy Leigh Lussier is a screenwriter, filmmaker, and creative collaborator who works across multiple genres including horror and drama. She has experience in independent film production, writing, and on-set collaboration, and regularly shares insights into the filmmaking process with the screenwriting community. About the Host With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level. Resources Mentioned in the Episode Vertical storytelling platforms and mobile-first content HBO series Primal Connect with Kristy Leigh Lussier Instagram: @kantoka Watch Kristy’s vertical drama: The Witch Wolf's Mate Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun Website: thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/screenwriterpod YouTube: @thesuccessfulscreenwriter #ScreenwritingPodcast #ScreenwritingTips #VerticalSeries #Filmmaking #IndieFilmmaker #Scriptwriting #TheSuccessfulScreenwriter #WritingCommunity Connect with Guest Instagram: @kantoka127 Watch her vertical drama: The Witch Wolf's Mate Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun Watch: Elsy Website: thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com Instagram: @screenwriterpod YouTube: @thesuccessfulscreenwriter #screenwriting #filmmaking #writingtips #screenwriterlife #storytelling #filmindustry #indiefilm #writerslife Please share this podcast with your community!

In Episode 308, Geoffrey D. Calhoun and co-host Kristy Leigh Lussier dig into one of the biggest shifts happening in film right now: the rise of YouTubers as box office draws. Using Iron Lung as a case study, they unpack how creator-driven films are outperforming studio releases, why Hollywood is resisting transparency around indie success, and what this power shift means for filmmakers. They also tackle persistent screenwriting myths about page numbers and beat timing, break down writer’s block from a neurological perspective, and have a candid conversation about how AI should and should not be used in the writing process. What You’ll Learn in This Episode Why YouTubers are now the real box office stars How Iron Lung succeeded as a low-budget, single-location indie The truth about page numbers, beat sheets, and rigid structure rules Why writer’s block is often a physical response, not a creative failure How AI can support writers without replacing them Key Moments 00:20 – Seeing Iron Lung and why it works as contained horror 02:25 – Why studios won’t release indie box office numbers 04:22 – YouTubers as the new movie stars and marketing engines 10:16 – The myth of hitting exact beats on exact page numbers 22:23 – How AI should be used to help writers, not replace them About the Cohost Kristy Leigh Lussier is a filmmaker, producer, and screenwriter working in today’s independent film space. She brings a grounded, real-world perspective to writing craft, production realities, and industry shifts, especially where new media and traditional filmmaking collide. About the Host With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level. Resources Mentioned in the Episode Iron Lung Markiplier Five Nights at Freddy’s Snowpiercer The Guide for Every Screenwriter Screenplay Story The Writer’s Journey Connect with Kristy Instagram: @kantoka127 Vertical Drama: The Witch Wolf’s Mate Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun Website: thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com Instagram: @screenwriterpod YouTube: @thesuccessfulscreenwriter #ScreenwritingPodcast #IndieFilm #IronLung #YouTubersInFilm #FilmIndustry #WriterLife #ScreenwritingAdvice #Filmmaking Connect with Guest Instagram: @kantoka127 Watch her vertical drama: The Witch Wolf's Mate Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun Watch: Elsy Website: thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com Instagram: @screenwriterpod YouTube: @thesuccessfulscreenwriter #screenwriting #filmmaking #writingtips #screenwriterlife #storytelling #filmindustry #indiefilm #writerslife Please share this podcast with your community!

In this episode, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is joined by co-host Kristy Leigh to unpack what Five Nights at Freddy’s 1 & 2 reveal about the current state of Hollywood storytelling. What happens when IP, fan service, and box office data matter more than narrative coherence? Is this the future of studio filmmaking, and if so, where does that leave screenwriters who still care about story? The conversation expands into the larger industry landscape, including Netflix’s dominance, data-driven decision making, the Stranger Things finale controversy, and what writers should realistically prepare for moving forward. What You’ll Learn in This Episode Why Five Nights at Freddy’s 2 abandons traditional storytelling in favor of fan service How studios are prioritizing IP and data over narrative cohesion The difference between box office success and storytelling success Why the Stranger Things finale struggled and what writers can learn from it Practical advice for new writers developing loglines and short stories Where story-driven filmmakers still fit in today’s industry Key Moments 00:25 – Geoffrey watches Five Nights at Freddy’s and immediately senses something is off 03:00 – Kristy explains how fan service overtook story in the sequel 07:00 – Geoffrey breaks down why the sequel has no clear plot or rules 09:45 – Is Hollywood splitting into data-driven content vs story-driven films? 15:00 – Why the Stranger Things finale failed structurally 17:40 – Advice for writers handwriting drafts vs typing 19:00 – How to turn loglines and short stories into real screenplays About the Guest Kristy Leigh Lussier is a producer, filmmaker, and longtime co-host of The Successful Screenwriter. She brings a grounded, industry-aware perspective to conversations about storytelling, IP adaptations, and the shifting realities of modern filmmaking. About the Host With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level. Resources Mentioned in the Episode Five Nights at Freddy’s (Film Franchise) Netflix industry data and subscriber growth Stranger Things behind-the-scenes documentary A24 and Neon as story-first distributors Connect with Kristy Instagram: @kantoka127 Vertical Drama: The Witch Wolf’s Mate Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun Website: thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com Instagram: @screenwriterpod YouTube: @thesuccessfulscreenwriter #Screenwriting #FilmIndustry #HollywoodTrends #StoryStructure #ScreenwritersLife #PodcastForWriters Connect with Guest Instagram: @kantoka127 Watch her vertical drama: The Witch Wolf's Mate Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun Watch: Elsy Website: thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com Instagram: @screenwriterpod YouTube: @thesuccessfulscreenwriter #screenwriting #filmmaking #writingtips #screenwriterlife #storytelling #filmindustry #indiefilm #writerslife Please share this podcast with your community!

In Episode 306, Geoffrey D. Calhoun and Kristy Leigh Lussier kick things off with a passionate recommendation for the absurd, whimsical thriller-comedy Dust Bunny, then pivot into what writers are feeling right now in the marketplace. They talk about how distributors are shifting toward data-driven “checkbox” content, why star power is not the safety net it used to be, and what that means for screenwriters trying to break in consistently. Then they get into some industry tea, including the rumors swirling around Stranger Things Season 5 and AI, and zoom out into a practical craft debate: is a “vomit draft” (or as a listener calls it, “Draft Zero”) actually the best path to finishing scripts and getting to the rewrite where the real work happens. The episode wraps with audience questions about getting a manager and what to do if you can see scenes in your head but struggle to get them onto the page. What You’ll Learn in This Episode Why finishing a rough first draft is often the fastest path to a strong script What distributors and streamers want right now, and why it is increasingly data-driven How to think about concept clarity and producibility without losing your voice Practical ways to network with managers that do not feel transactional A simple mindset shift that keeps you from rewriting the first 20 pages forever Key Moments 00:18 Dust Bunny: why Geoffrey calls it a rare “whimsical absurd” gem 02:00 Visual subtext and symbolism in Dust Bunny, plus the “unreliable narrator” question 05:13 AFM market shift: why actor names are not carrying films like they used to 10:01 Stranger Things Season 5 AI rumors and the spectrum of AI use in writing 15:45 “Bad advice” spotlight: why the vomit draft (Draft Zero) still matters About the Cohost Kristy Leigh Lussier is Geoffrey’s longtime co-host and a sharp voice on screenwriting craft, industry trends, and the reality of building a writing career one draft at a time. About the Host With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level. Resources Mentioned in the Episode Dust Bunny (rented on Amazon Prime) Brian Fuller (discussion of his work including Pushing Daisies and Hannibal) Big Eyes (referenced as an example tied to credit and authorship) Draft Zero (listener Gary Thomas’s preferred term for the “vomit draft”) Geoffrey’s book: The Guide for Every Screenwriter Connect with Kristy Instagram: @kantoka127 Vertical drama: The Witch Wolfs Mate Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun Website: thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com Instagram: @screenwriterpod YouTube: @thesuccessfulscreenwriter #screenwriting #screenwriter #writingcommunity #screenwritingtips #screenwritinglife #filmmaking #filmindustry #writingprocess #firstdraft #rewrite Tags Connect with Guest Instagram: @kantoka127 Watch her vertical drama: The Witch Wolf's Mate Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun Watch: Elsy Website: thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com Instagram: @screenwriterpod YouTube: @thesuccessfulscreenwriter #screenwriting #filmmaking #writingtips #screenwriterlife #storytelling #filmindustry #indiefilm #writerslife Please share this podcast with your community!

In Episode 305 Geoffrey D. Calhoun is joined by Kristy Leigh Lussier for a wide-ranging conversation about storytelling, tone, franchise arcs, and industry realities, and taking a gig you don't love. From horror movies about rabid chimpanzees to why darker sequels often resonate more deeply, this episode blends craft analysis, industry news, and practical screenwriting advice straight from the trenches. What You’ll Learn in This Episode Why tonal shifts in sequels can strengthen a franchise What Wicked: Part Two gets right that surprises non-musical fans The storytelling mistake that doomed the 2011 Conan the Barbarian remake How long-form character arcs deepen emotional investment Practical answers to audience screenwriting questions about dialogue, pitching, and career choices Key Moments 00:00–03:30 – Reviewing Wicked: Part Two and the power of darker second acts 05:00–07:30 – Franchise arcs and why Harry Potter matures with its audience 08:20–10:30 – The original vs. remake debate: Conan the Barbarian vs. the 2011 reboot 10:45–12:30 – Industry Snapshot: MTV officially exits the music-video era 14:20–18:20 – Listener Q&A: multilingual dialogue and writing outside your favorite genre 19:30–22:40 – What actually happens after a successful pitch and why lawyers matter About the Guest Kristy Leigh Lussier is a producer, writer, and script consultant known for her sharp story instincts and deep understanding of character-driven storytelling. She brings thoughtful insight into franchise structure, tonal control, and navigating the industry with clarity. About the Host With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level. Resources Mentioned in the Episode The Successful Screenwriter Membership (TV pilot course) Entertainment lawyers and contract basics for writers Franchise case studies: Harry Potter, Wicked, Conan the Barbarian Connect with Kristy Instagram: @kantoka127 Vertical Drama: The Witch Wolf’s Mate Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun Website: thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com Instagram: screenwriterpod YouTube: @thesuccessfulscreenwriter #TheSuccessfulScreenwriter #ScreenwritingPodcast #FilmIndustry #StoryStructure #TVWriting #ScreenwriterLife #FilmAnalysis Connect with Guest Instagram: @kantoka127 Watch her vertical drama: The Witch Wolf's Mate Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun Watch: Elsy Website: thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com Instagram: @screenwriterpod YouTube: @thesuccessfulscreenwriter #screenwriting #filmmaking #writingtips #screenwriterlife #storytelling #filmindustry #indiefilm #writerslife Please share this podcast with your community!

In Episode 304, Geoffrey D. Calhoun and co-host Kristy Leigh kick off the new year with a wide-ranging conversation about endings, franchises, and the evolving business shaping how stories get made. From reactions to the finale of Stranger Things and Avatar 3, to a deep dive into the Netflix–Warner Bros–Paramount power struggle, this episode explores how data, algorithms, and vertical platforms are redefining opportunities for screenwriters. They also break down bad screenwriting advice, vertical storytelling trends, and what writers should focus on heading into the year ahead. What You’ll Learn in This Episode Why darker, more definitive endings often resonate more with audiences How James Cameron writing Avatar 2 and 3 as one script impacted the storytelling Why the real battle between Netflix, Warner Bros., and Paramount is about data, not just IP How algorithms are influencing what gets greenlit and how scripts are shaped Why features, thrillers, and horror still offer strong opportunities for writers How vertical storytelling is evolving beyond romance into new genres Key Moments 02:49 – Why Avatar 3 works better than Avatar 2 06:46 – The Netflix–Warner Bros–Paramount data war explained 16:58 – Bad screenwriting advice: “Nothing needs to happen in the first 10 pages” 19:30 – How to hook readers in the first page, not the first act 22:22 – How algorithms are already shaping vertical storytelling About the Guest Kristy Leigh Lussier is a writer, producer, and vertical drama creator known for her sharp industry insights and hands-on experience in emerging storytelling platforms. She co-hosts The Successful Screenwriter Podcast and regularly works at the intersection of traditional film, streaming, and vertical content. About the Host With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter Podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level. Resources Mentioned in the Episode Underwater House of Cards Vertical drama platforms and TikTok mini-series trends Connect with Kristy Instagram: @kantoka127 Vertical Drama: The Witch Wolf’s Mate Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun Website: thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com Instagram: @screenwriterpod YouTube: @thesuccessfulscreenwriter #TheSuccessfulScreenwriter #ScreenwritingPodcast #FilmIndustry #VerticalDrama #IndieFilm #ScreenwritingAdvice #FilmBusiness #Storytelling Connect with Guest Instagram: @kantoka127 Watch her vertical drama: The Witch Wolf's Mate Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun Watch: Elsy Website: thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com Instagram: @screenwriterpod YouTube: @thesuccessfulscreenwriter #screenwriting #filmmaking #writingtips #screenwriterlife #storytelling #filmindustry #indiefilm #writerslife Please share this podcast with your community!

Episode 303 is a packed Q&A with Geoffrey D. Calhoun and co-host Kristy Leigh, kicking off with holiday movie talk, a Star Wars tactical jacket upgrade, and why screenwriting can change how you watch films forever. Then they jump into the real stuff writers are asking right now: how to build characters that feel human, why empathy might be the hidden superpower behind great scripts, how to query smarter, what competitions are actually good for, how to adapt a novel into a screenplay, and what page counts make readers actually want to open your script. What You’ll Learn in This Episode Why empathy is a major advantage in writing believable characters How to create stronger characters using simple, practical frameworks How to query without spraying your script everywhere When competitions help, and when they are just noise What page count makes your feature feel “readable” to industry folks Key Moments 03:19 Does screenwriting “ruin” movies or deepen your appreciation? 10:07 Geoffrey’s worst script read and why empathy matters on the page 17:50 Building great characters 26:41 Competitions: what they are good for, what to avoid, and why research matters 29:42 Novel to screenplay: streamline Plot A, combine characters, and write efficiently 36:24 Feature page count: what feels professional and what gets ignored About the Cohost: Kristy Leigh is Geoffrey’s co-host and a performer with a sharp eye for story, structure, and what makes characters pop on screen. She brings a grounded industry perspective, plus the actor’s lens on why certain writing choices work. About the Host With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level. Resources Mentioned in the Episode The Guide for Every Screenwriter (Geoffrey’s book) WriterDuet (screenwriting software) InkTip Script Leads (Geoffrey shares free vetted leads) “Sinopedia” (Kristy’s horror script breakdown book recommendation) Films and shows discussed: Christmas Vacation, Die Hard 2, Die Hard 3, The Office, Avatar: The Way of Water, upcoming Avatar 3 Enjoyable writing picks: DogMan (Luc Besson), Sinners Connect with Kristy Instagram: @kantoka127 Kristy’s vertical drama: The Witch Wolfs Mate Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun Website: thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com Instagram: @screenwriterpod YouTube: @thesuccessfulscreenwriter #TheSuccessfulScreenwriter #Screenwriting #ScreenwritingTips #Screenwriter #WritingCommunity #IndieFilm #Filmmaking #QueryLetters #ScreenplayStructure #CharacterDevelopment Connect with Guest Instagram: @kantoka127 Watch her vertical drama: The Witch Wolf's Mate Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun Watch: Elsy Website: thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com Instagram: @screenwriterpod YouTube: @thesuccessfulscreenwriter #screenwriting #filmmaking #writingtips #screenwriterlife #storytelling #filmindustry #indiefilm #writerslife Please share this podcast with your community!

In Episode 302, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is joined once again by Kristy Leigh Lussier for a wide-ranging, candid conversation that blends film breakdowns, screenwriting craft, and real-world industry advice. The duo digs into why Sisu: Road to Revenge works as a sequel, how emotional stakes elevate spectacle, and what filmmakers can learn from restraint. They also explore the surprising power of HBO’s Welcome to Derry, including why sometimes a story should end exactly where it does. From there, the conversation shifts into the realities of modern screenwriting, including the rise of “tell-don’t-show” storytelling for second-screen audiences, what that means for craft, and how writers can adapt without losing their voice. The episode wraps with practical career advice for emerging writers, a hard truth about querying too early, and a holiday debate that refuses to die: is Die Hard actually a Christmas movie? What You’ll Learn in This Episode Why Sisu 2 succeeds by keeping its original formula intact How emotional stakes matter more than scale in sequels The risks of overtelling stories for second-screen audiences When “tell-don’t-show” notes appear and how to handle them professionally Whether characters must always change to have a strong arc Why sending scripts too early can hurt your career How to protect yourself from common industry scams Key Moments 00:42 – Why Sisu: Road to Revenge feels like “Norwegian Fury Road” 03:00 – Emotional stakes and weaponizing personal loss in sequels 05:11 – Why Welcome to Derry delivers rare emotional closure 09:39 – Is “tell-don’t-show” becoming the new normal? 18:26 – Do characters have to change? The Big Lebowski debate 22:27 – Why writers should not send scripts too early 27:35 – Die Hard debate officially begins About the Guest host Kristy Leigh Lussier is a filmmaker, producer, and longtime co-host of The Successful Screenwriter Podcast. Known for her honest industry insight and sharp storytelling instincts, Kristy brings a grounded, practical perspective to conversations about craft, career, and the realities of working in film and television. About the Host With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level. Resources Mentioned in the Episode Sisu: Road to Revenge Welcome to Derry The Big Lebowski Young Adult Die Hard Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun Website: https://www.thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/screenwriterpod YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/@thesuccessfulscreenwriter #ScreenwritingPodcast #ScreenwritingAdvice #FilmIndustry #WritingCommunity #TheSuccessfulScreenwriter #StoryStructure #ScreenwritingTips Connect with Guest Instagram: @kantoka127 Watch her vertical drama: The Witch Wolf's Mate Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun Watch: Elsy Website: thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com Instagram: @screenwriterpod YouTube: @thesuccessfulscreenwriter #screenwriting #filmmaking #writingtips #screenwriterlife #storytelling #filmindustry #indiefilm #writerslife Please share this podcast with your community!

In this solo episode of The Successful Screenwriter, Geoffrey D. Calhoun breaks down the shocking acquisition bids involving Netflix, Warner Bros., and Paramount and explains what they actually mean for working screenwriters. With co-host Kristy Leigh Lussier sidelined by COVID, Geoffrey steps in to unpack the real industry impact behind the headlines, from shrinking theatrical windows and mid-budget film erosion to foreign investment, media consolidation, and soft power. Most importantly, Geoffrey offers clarity, perspective, and practical guidance on how writers can still build careers, get projects made, and create opportunity in a rapidly shifting entertainment landscape. What You’ll Learn in This Episode Why Netflix’s business model puts mid-budget films at risk What Paramount’s bid could mean for theatrical releases and media control How monopolization affects writers, creators, and audiences Where writers can realistically get work made right now Why chasing gigs is less effective than building IP Whether moving to LA still makes sense in today’s industry How to choose the right idea when none of them feel ready Key Moments 00:00 Industry update and why this episode could not wait 06:30 Netflix’s $80B bid and the future of theatrical releases 15:20 Paramount’s $108B offer, foreign money, and CNN influence 27:45 Why Netflix wins regardless of who acquires Warner Bros 36:10 What writers should do now to survive and thrive 48:30 Choosing the idea that is worth writing About the Host With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level. Resources Mentioned in the Episode Weekly free screenwriting leads at https://www.thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun Website: thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com Instagram: @screenwriterpod YouTube: @thesuccessfulscreenwriter #Screenwriting #FilmIndustry #HollywoodBusiness #Netflix #WarnerBros #Paramount #ScreenwritersLife #FilmCareers #StreamingWars #TheSuccessfulScreenwriter Connect with Guest Instagram: @kantoka127 Watch her vertical drama: The Witch Wolf's Mate Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun Watch: Elsy Website: thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com Instagram: @screenwriterpod YouTube: @thesuccessfulscreenwriter #screenwriting #filmmaking #writingtips #screenwriterlife #storytelling #filmindustry #indiefilm #writerslife Please share this podcast with your community!

We are celebrating our big 300th episode with in depth craft talk and our giveaway. Kristy breaks down seeing Five Nights at Freddy’s 2 in a packed theater, what real fan service looks like, and why understanding the assignment with IP can matter more than chasing four quadrant appeal. Geoffrey shares his hot take on Wicked For Good and why character motivation has to make emotional sense or the whole story starts to wobble. We talk about Netflix buying Warner Bros, what consolidation could mean for theaters and for working writers, and why packed screenings still matter. From there we dig into real listener questions, including what to do when your second act is boring in a contained script, how subplots keep a story alive, why cutting to the antagonist is a secret weapon, and why you should master features before jumping into pilots and series. If you are stuck in act two, worried your work is not ready, or wondering how to get your script seen when you feel like you live in the middle of nowhere, this milestone episode is for you. What You’ll Learn in This Episode How to tell if your script is truly ready to be “out there” Practical ways to fix a boring second act in a contained story Why subplots and antagonists keep your pages from going flat The real difference between features and pilots, and why that matters What fandom driven hits like Five Nights at Freddy’s 2 can teach you about IP and audience Key Moments 00:20 – Celebrating episode 300 and announcing the big giveaway prizes 01:12 – Kristy’s breakdown of Five Nights at Freddy’s 2 and writing for fandoms 06:45 – Geoffrey’s Wicked 2 hot take, grief, and the missed John Wick moment 12:17 – Netflix buying Warner Bros, what this means for theaters and writers 23:42 – Listener question, how to fix a boring second act in a limited setting About the CoHost Kristy Leigh is a writer, director, and co host of the show. She works in film and television, writes and directs vertical drama such as The Witch Wolf’s Mate for ReelShort, and helps writers level up their scripts through feedback and development. About the Host With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. His mission is to inspire and empower writers and filmmakers at every level. Resources Mentioned in the Episode The Guide For Every Screenwriter Five Nights at Freddy’s 2 Wicked For Good InkTip ScreenX and 4D style theatrical screenings Connect with Guest Kristy on Instagram: @kantoka127 Kristy’s vertical drama The Witch Wolf’s Mate Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun Website: thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com Instagram: @screenwriterpod YouTube: @thesuccessfulscreenwriter #ScreenwritingPodcast #TheSuccessfulScreenwriter #ScreenwritingTips #SecondActProblems #BadScreenwritingAdvice #KristyLeigh #VirtualGeoffrey #InkTip #FiveNightsAtFreddys #WickedMovie Connect with Guest Instagram: @kantoka127 Watch her vertical drama: The Witch Wolf's Mate Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun Watch: Elsy Website: thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com Instagram: @screenwriterpod YouTube: @thesuccessfulscreenwriter #screenwriting #filmmaking #writingtips #screenwriterlife #storytelling #filmindustry #indiefilm #writerslife Please share this podcast with your community!

In this episode, filmmaker Jesse McAnally joins Geoffrey to break down the real process of making an indie feature from scratch. Jesse shares how he developed The Daughters of the Domino, ran a successful Kickstarter, storyboarded every shot in Cine Tracer, and navigated the unexpected challenges that hit indie sets. From on-the-fly rewrites to managing clashing personalities, Jesse opens up about the realities most filmmakers never talk about. If you’re building your own film or planning to, this one is loaded with practical insight and encouragement. What You’ll Learn in This Episode How to develop a feature from a childhood concept Smarter ways to run a Kickstarter without drowning in giveaways Why pre-visualization can save your production How to adjust performances and scenes in real time The truth about set conflicts and managing morale Why your film is your calling card The power of collaboration and treating people well Key Moments 00:20 Jesse explains the origin of The Daughters of the Domino 02:50 How he structured a stress-free Kickstarter with digital perks 05:40 Storyboarding every shot using Cine Tracer 07:00 The first-day disaster and managing crew expectations 10:26 On-set rewrites after discovering new opportunities in performance About the Guest Jesse McAnally is a filmmaker whose latest feature, The Daughters of the Domino, blends mystery, character-driven storytelling, and sharp visual planning. His work has screened at festivals across the country and continues to draw attention for its craft and originality. About the Host With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a passionate mentor in the industry. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to empower writers and filmmakers at every level. Resources Mentioned in This Episode The Daughters of the Domino film info and festival updates Cine Tracer (previz/storyboarding tool) Connect with Guest Instagram: @jessemcanally Website: https://www.jessemcanally.com Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun Website: thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com Instagram: @screenwriterpod YouTube: @thesuccessfulscreenwriter #screenwriting #filmmaking #indiefilm #podcast #thesuccessfulscreenwriter #kickstarterfilm #storydevelopment Connect with Guest Instagram: @kantoka127 Watch her vertical drama: The Witch Wolf's Mate Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun Watch: Elsy Website: thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com Instagram: @screenwriterpod YouTube: @thesuccessfulscreenwriter #screenwriting #filmmaking #writingtips #screenwriterlife #storytelling #filmindustry #indiefilm #writerslife Please share this podcast with your community!

Geoffrey and Kristy tackle some of the worst “rules” floating around screenwriting circles. They break down why advice like “the audience must always be ahead of your characters” or “every line of dialogue needs action underneath it” can actually limit your voice and make your script feel stiff. They dig into Predator: Badlands, Prey, and the new Deathstalker, talk about empathy for monsters, building lore that feels lived in, and how theme and character relationships elevate genre. Then they answer questions on action description, page density, and when it actually makes sense to bend or break format. If you’ve ever felt boxed in by conflicting advice, this episode clears the fog and shows you how to keep scripts clean and professional without losing your style What You’ll Learn in This Episode Why some “never do this” rules are just personal preferences How to choose whether the audience is ahead of, equal to, or behind your characters When dialogue stands fine on its own How to keep action lines tight while still revealing character How to bend format without looking sloppy Key Moments 00:20 300th episode giveaway teaser 00:57 Predator: Badlands, empathy for a Predator, and theme talk 08:30 Breaking down the “audience must be ahead” myth 11:59 Why dialogue doesn’t always need action underneath 20:48 When breaking format is smart instead of sloppy About the Guest Kristy Leigh Lussier is a screenwriter, director, and producer focused on character driven storytelling. She brings a director’s eye to structure, performance, and theme, and she joins Geoffrey in the weekly livestreams to help writers level up their craft. About the Host With films on network television, streaming platforms, and in theaters, Geoffrey D. Calhoun is a screenwriter, author of The Guide for Every Screenwriter, and a mentor dedicated to helping writers grow. He hosts The Successful Screenwriter podcast to support filmmakers at every level. Resources Mentioned in the Episode Predator: Badlands Prey Deathstalker Pearl Harbor (screenplay example) Star Wars Episode III fight scene Connect with Kristy Kristy on Instagram: @kantoka127 Kristy’s vertical drama: The Witch Wolfs Mate Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun Website: thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com Instagram: @screenwriterpod YouTube: @thesuccessfulscreenwriter If this episode helped you rethink some of the “rules,” subscribe, leave a quick review, and share it with a writer who needs to hear it. Screenshot this episode, tag @screenwriterpod, and tell us one writing “rule” you’re ready to let go of. And keep an eye on Instagram for the 300th episode giveaway. #screenwriting #screenwritingpodcast #screenwritingtips #amwriting #scriptnotes #indiefilm #PredatorBadlands #Deathstalker #writingadvice Connect with Guest Instagram: @kantoka127 Watch her vertical drama: The Witch Wolf's Mate Connect with Geoffrey D. Calhoun Watch: Elsy Website: thesuccessfulscreenwriter.com Instagram: @screenwriterpod YouTube: @thesuccessfulscreenwriter #screenwriting #filmmaking #writingtips #screenwriterlife #storytelling #filmindustry #indiefilm #writerslife Please share this podcast with your community!